From: "(EEE (US ANys)" < To: es" Subject: RE: Maxwell MILs Date: Thu, 14 Oct 2021 16:03:05 +0000 Attachments: Government MIL v1 for chiefs - TAM.docx Here are my proposed edits and comments. A bunch of my comments are the same as yours, or propose ways to address things you flagged — but | do think at least some of your comments are outstanding. Rather than me trying to decide which ones need further response, would you like to take a look at this and then add any additional comments? Fron: a ) <i > Sent: Thursday, October 14, 2021 9:09 AM o: TS (USANYS) <i Subject: RE: Maxwell MILs Ok, if helpful, my comment bubbles are in the attached. From: TS (JSANYS) <i Sent: Wednesday, October 13, 2021 11:36 PM To: eS) < a > Subject: RE: Maxwell MILs | just read through them in hard copy, and then am going to suggest some changes in track tomorrow (if we ever have time between what is now a packed calendar). I’m happy to add them on top of yours, or send to you when done, either way. From: TS <i - Sent: Wednesday, October 13, 2021 6:53 PM To: ES (USANYS) <> Subject: RE: Maxwell MILs I've taken a first pass through the MILs. | didn’t line edit, figuring you would do so, but put general comments in bubbles for certain sections/arguments. | can forward that to you, or wait until | see your comments and add any of mine that remain. Overall | think it could be tighter but they are on the right track. From: a (USANYS) <i Sent: Wednesday, October 13, 2021 5:07 PM To: A, ) <>; en ) < [is > C: (SANS) a ; <i Subject: RE: Maxwell MILs Thanks, looking forward to reading. From: ns ) <> Sent: Wednesday, October 13, 2021 5:03 PM To: EE (SANS) | a) <i Cc: TS (SANS) i; a) <c Subject: Maxwell MILs EFTA00065492

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— Attached are drafts of most of the Maxwell MILs. This draft has all but two of the motions and the front matter. We’re planning to do a careful proofread, but thought we should just get these to you now rather than wait for that. All comments are more than welcome, of course. 4 > ow s = & o Assistant United States Attorney Southern District of New York 1 Saint Andrews Plaza New York, New York 10007 EFTA00065493